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[Shadows of your memory]

Voices....

the voices were too loud often to where you cant hear the beats very good and it kinda got difficult to understand them. other than that it was nice

Ginchy responds:

Yeah, I think i know what you mean. the vox in the bridge and parts of the chorus are mixed too loud. Thanks for bringing that to my attention. Here are the lyrics in case you can't understand them (I hope to redo this song, and when I do I'll take special care to sing the words clearly):

V1:

I can't remember where I was today.
Just let the past stretch out inside its grave.

Give me back the heart that ordinary routine has worn away.
Awake but everything seems twisted and wrong as it always does when sleeps deep but not that well or long.

CHORUS:

Forgetting, forgotten, memory rotton
(Shadows of Your Memory)
A Ghost and a glimmer, a shimmer in my recollection
(Shadows of your memory)

V2:

I'm drowning in this darkening ocean,
A world that's void and moving in slow motion.

Stand still like a heart stuck between beats and frozen in time and stagnant,
Falling slow forever fading negatives, memories bygone, buried deeply within and I'm free.

Bridge:

Free Of Your Memory

Chorus:

Forgetting, forgotten, memory rotton
(Shadows of Your Memory)
A Ghost and a glimmer, a shimmer in my recollection
(Shadows of your memory)

[CLOCK DAY 06--_--LOOP]

y wount you answer me.....

read the title

wow stop getting soungs stuck in my head even though i havent found one that i dont like yet....

PERVOK responds:

Sorry about not answering the PM. I use FL 5, and there is really no basic way of using it, but if you get the demo version you can fool around with it and learn it :D

[But Not Now--_--(1:52)]

im starting to love all of your music

its all good but it would be better with more length and more vocals and a darker tune

PERVOK responds:

I'll have to make some more songs like this.

But, like you said, with more vocals though :)

[Nemo]

...........wow.......

this song gives me two feelings at once: a calm sense of insecurity. simply amasing.
BTW what mixer did you use?

Professor-Doom responds:

FL Studio 5.

[Drumz n' Stuf]

Pretty good!

Definently your best so far. Its a catchy tune.
only down is about a quarter way thru the volume goes up on the drumsand bass so it gets harder to hear th swishing.

MyKellModder responds:

Wow Thanks ^^;
I give you a FIVE for actully submitting a review worth reading ^^;

[- Forever -]

very fine

wooooooooooo ur good make more

Rave4Yourself responds:

System overload....... sounds like a good track name, :P

lol, thanks.